Tuesday 27 August 2013

Gary's suggestions

1:段落空两格
2:decides -> determines
3:going on -> on going
4:单复数
5:fitness -> fit
6:What SimMobility is.
7:To be exactly -> To be exact
8:nearby other agents -> nearby agents
9:is like -> is
10:one -> a/an
11 : did -> do
12 : proposed -> propose
13 : in -> during (for times)
14 : experience -> experiment
15 : It -> This
16 : the Figure -> Figure
17 : Bugis -> the Bugis & Singapore -> the Singapore
18 : speed-up -> speedup (check all Google)
19 : prove -> show
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